--- In snorkack@..., "Vern" <vertru@c...> wrote:
Hi, thought I'd review here instead of on FF so I can see your
response. I still haven't figured out how to over there, but then I'm
a slow old handyelf and these here newfangled electronical gizmos tend
to make me a little batty. (I heard that smirk) Ah hem, now on with
the review. That was bloody brilliant. Such a moving and inspired bit
of literature I have seldom scene in the annals of fanficdom. Are you
suitibly impressed? have I gotten your attention?
Yes, you have our attention. Shall I put on my tux to recieve our
award? :)
Actually we have no particular preference where the reviews go. If
you're more comfortable with using ff.net, then do so. If you prefer
here, be our guest.
Goody, really I just
wanted to say that the way you put that chapter together was quite
well done. I am greatly enjoying Harry and his attempts to be patient
with Dumbdore and Snarvellus, and the way they just keep trying, and
he just keeps pushing them out of his way. The Ball was a hoot. Ron,
Dean, and Seamus just don't get it, maybe one day... Loved the scene
in the rose garden as Draco finally gets a clue. Gotta love Luna and
her sweet dottiness. Then again, she is such a lady in the way she
deals with attackers. I guess ya gotta wonder who trained those two
trolls to look like students. They couldn't possibly be human and be
that clueless could they? Ah well, at least the two lovers got back to
the dance. Looking forward to Xmas at Grimmauld Place and to the
revelation of Harry's big plan, that should be very interesting.
Thanks loads for sharing such fine work with your adoring fans.
Vern
I know everyone is dying to see what Harry has up his sleeves. Well it
ain't a rabbit. :)
I suppose I could tell everyone just what is going to happen in a
special scene at grimmauld place.... or I could reveal the reasons WHY
the plan must happen, then eventually, unfold the plan in all its
majesty as it happens.
Personally the second option sounds better if you ask me Vern. It's my
own way of tormenting you readers. And you guys love it. :P
- Bob