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Hi, I reviewed on FF.net as well, but if I review here I'll probably get various other people shooting me down...if you think it's strange that I'm on a different email at FFN, it's because I prefer a bit of order...

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So Harry's leg isn't going to get better at all? Rats, that's a bummer...

Boxing day at 10? I DO hope Dumbledore's hacked off for that one if nothing else, although it seems to get in the way, somewhat, of Draco's idea of taking Snape's poor teaching/grading to the BOG. Oh, and does Harry have a portkey of his own like he gave to others? Along those lines, is the snowflake Hermione's portkey?

Harry's giving Dumbledore too many chances, in my opinion, he said last chapter that next time he was pushing back and that Dimple wouldn't like it right? So how exactly is a sticking charm so bad? Sure it demonstrates power, but doesn't actually do much else right? Although perhaps he should just turn Snape to much, literally, in front of Dumbly... Oh, and taking it a bit further, how about dealing with the other Gryfs? Mayb maim a few...

Draco/Luna? Well there's a weird pairing, but if it works out then cool! They are cute together, I think, at least.

The Chamber of Secrets from the Head Girl's room? Now there's a cool twist! I had the idea of Harry cleaning out the Chamber and using it for himself? How about adding the Fidelius to it as well in this story? I mean, if/when Harry&co come back to Britain, the Chamber seems like a good place to start, even if just a foothold.

So far Harry seems to have everyone he actually needs, in terms of humans both magic and muggle. What about the goblins? I get the feeling that they wouldn't take too kindly to it if they were attacked by Voldy while Harry knew about it but didn't do anything about it? Oh, and what do the Weasley boys mean when they said "spring"? And is Charlie going along, or even in the know?