Hi, thought I'd review here instead of on FF so I can see your
response. I still haven't figured out how to over there, but then I'm
a slow old handyelf and these here newfangled electronical gizmos tend
to make me a little batty. (I heard that smirk) Ah hem, now on with
the review. That was bloody brilliant. Such a moving and inspired bit
of literature I have seldom scene in the annals of fanficdom. Are you
suitibly impressed? have I gotten your attention? Goody, really I just
wanted to say that the way you put that chapter together was quite
well done. I am greatly enjoying Harry and his attempts to be patient
with Dumbdore and Snarvellus, and the way they just keep trying, and
he just keeps pushing them out of his way. The Ball was a hoot. Ron,
Dean, and Seamus just don't get it, maybe one day... Loved the scene
in the rose garden as Draco finally gets a clue. Gotta love Luna and
her sweet dottiness. Then again, she is such a lady in the way she
deals with attackers. I guess ya gotta wonder who trained those two
trolls to look like students. They couldn't possibly be human and be
that clueless could they? Ah well, at least the two lovers got back to
the dance. Looking forward to Xmas at Grimmauld Place and to the
revelation of Harry's big plan, that should be very interesting.
Thanks loads for sharing such fine work with your adoring fans.
Vern
