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Ch 12 Review


Vern
 

For

Spoiler

Space

I

will

say

you

sure

know

how

to

write

a

rollercoaster.

I can't remember the last time I lughed, cried, ranted, and made
obscene gestures at the computer so much as I did reading this
chapter. What a marvelous piece of work Bob and Alyx. Yes, hate to
admit it but a couple of scenes did put tears in my eyes. Between you
and Abraxan, I'm not sure but I think it's a plot to ruin my
big-tough-rambunctios-guy's-guy image. But that's okay, I'll get my
revenge in the end; just you wait!

On a lighter note, I wanted to compliment you on your inventive
revenge on Ab by using her as a potion ingreient. I laughed heartily
throughout that scene. Your drunk Harry was just about the best one
I've seen yet with his magic doing odd things and all.

Wonderful chapter folks, and as always I look forward to dreading #13.
I'm not triskadekaphobic, so no problem here.

Vern, still giggling over drunk Harry lol

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