Re: Japan Flood Relief Benefit Email Template
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Definitely checking the attendee list and targeting specific people.??
On Tue, Aug 21, 2018 at 12:03 PM Susan Hamaker < smhamaker@...> wrote: Several raffle items. The rest looks great! Be sure to check out the attendees list first; you don’t want to send emails to people who have already purchased tickets.? Got it.? Thanks.? How's this instead?
Hope you're having a good day! If you are free, several organizations in NYC's Japanese & Japanese American community have organized a benefit this Thursday evening for Japan Flood Relief and all net proceeds will go through the JAA Japan Flood Relief Fund.?
There will be hors d'oeuvres, premium sake, beer, and wine provided by Chef John McCarthy and several raffles provided by various organizations such as Japan Society, JAA, Sakagura, and more.?
Location:?OKA – (between 30th and 31st Streets)
Date:?Thursday, August 23, 2018?
Time:?6:30pm to 9:30pm
Online Ticket site:?
We would be honored if you are able to join us and feel free to invite anyone else.?
Hope to see you there!
Sounds good to me! Made a few suggested edits.
*** Hope you're having a good day! If you are free, several organizations in NYC's Japanese & Japanese American community have organized a benefit this Thursday evening from 6:30pm to 9:30pm at?OKA restaurant (). The benefit is for Japan Flood Relief and all net proceeds will go through the JAA Japan Flood Relief Fund.?
There will be hors d'oeuvres, premium sake, beer, and wine provided by Chef John McCarthy and several raffles provided by various organizations such as Japan Society, JAA, Sakagura, and more.?
Tickets are available via?
We would be honored if you are able to join us and feel free to invite anyone else.?
Hope to see you there!
Yuji On Tue, Aug 21, 2018 at 11:52 AM Susan Hamaker < smhamaker@...> wrote: I think that’s a nice idea, Yuji. You need to mention the venue, too. We all need to change the language to “net proceeds” rather than “all proceeds” just in case we’re unable to cover the remaining $1,000 we need to pay Chef John.?
Thanks, Susan Hey guys, I'm looking to send individual email to specific folks (thinking Fred Katayama, Nozomi san, etc). What do you guys think? Thinking to send below:
Hope you're having a good day! If you are free, a few of us have organized a benefit this Thursday evening from 6:30pm to 9:30pm. The benefit is for Japan Flood Relief and all proceeds will go through the JAA Flood Relief Fund.?
There will be hors d'oeuvres, premium sake, beer, and wine provided by Chef John McCarthy and several raffles provided by various organizations such as Japan Society, JAA, Sakagura, and more.?
Tickets are available via
We would be honored if you are able to join us and feel free to invite anyone else.?
Hope to see you there!
Yuji
Susan Hamaker Writer/Editor, JapanCulture?NYC.com smhamaker@...917.864.6457 (cell)
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Susan Hamaker Writer/Editor, JapanCulture?NYC.com smhamaker@...917.864.6457 (cell)
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