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Chapty 11
Ok, do you guys prefer reviews here, or on ff.net? also, do you prefer
new threads, or reply's to other threads? so many options.... I would say great work, but that would be an understatement, and then there is all the usual "damn man, i can't wait to read more, get your buts in gear" etc. but whats the point? your writting is great, and you know it! and you only made me late for work twice! but then again, i could blame my alarm clock... i know how hermy feels about spiders, since ive lived in this house, i've had them crawl on my while trying (i dont sleep easily) to sleep, and thinking it was lent, i grabbed it, crushed it, and threw it, and counting the number of marks on my wall *counts* only 10? well, i gues i did only trap a few, and i can't really see the marks on my floor... well, i get alot of "visitors" in my room, i see a spider, i kill it (they make a nice crackling sound when they burn*evil grin*) I do feel sorry for harry's leg....if only he could cut it open, and then get more phoenix tears.... or you know, cut it off, and re-grow it, but then i spose that petty-gross would have done that too hus finger.... R.A.B. Regulas Assinine(wtf is his middle name?) Black or so i think.... if thats even what you were talking about.... poor DUMbubbler, went and got killed for nuthing... Final Fantasy 7: Advent Children, CANT WAIT BABY YEAH!!! I'm even replaying the game (currently trying to finish getting Cloud's and Aeris' final limits, Disk One, Before Temple of the Ancients, both have Level 3-2) I think I missed one of the turtle paradise's flyers, damnit Enough babble, LET THE GAMES BEGIN!!!.... or end, i think its "bed time" Nite! |
Chapter 11 Review
Vern
Hi, thought I'd review here instead of on FF so I can see your
response. I still haven't figured out how to over there, but then I'm a slow old handyelf and these here newfangled electronical gizmos tend to make me a little batty. (I heard that smirk) Ah hem, now on with the review. That was bloody brilliant. Such a moving and inspired bit of literature I have seldom scene in the annals of fanficdom. Are you suitibly impressed? have I gotten your attention? Goody, really I just wanted to say that the way you put that chapter together was quite well done. I am greatly enjoying Harry and his attempts to be patient with Dumbdore and Snarvellus, and the way they just keep trying, and he just keeps pushing them out of his way. The Ball was a hoot. Ron, Dean, and Seamus just don't get it, maybe one day... Loved the scene in the rose garden as Draco finally gets a clue. Gotta love Luna and her sweet dottiness. Then again, she is such a lady in the way she deals with attackers. I guess ya gotta wonder who trained those two trolls to look like students. They couldn't possibly be human and be that clueless could they? Ah well, at least the two lovers got back to the dance. Looking forward to Xmas at Grimmauld Place and to the revelation of Harry's big plan, that should be very interesting. Thanks loads for sharing such fine work with your adoring fans. Vern |
Re: Just Wondering
--- In snorkack@..., "Kirk L. Staley" <kauthor@g...> wrote:
I was just wondering if you plan to put out your previous two story inAt the moment my own personal plans are to continue writing Sunset. I probably could do as you ask, but since Yahoo only gives us a paltry 20mb for storage here, it would be a shame to waste the space doubling up files. Part of the problem is that Sunset may very well take up a lot more chapters than DA or SC. Both of which were in the mid teens. Here I am working on chapter 12 and I haven't even had christmas yet. - Bob |
Re: Boot/What Happened
ralph s.
--- In snorkack@..., "Alyx" <alyxnw@y...> wrote:
Just a quick note for those who may not have read the A/N onthe subject. It seems that a reviewer is under the impression that ourAuthor's Notes and because they are too "chatty". We don't really thinkthat will happen but, on the off chance that Sunset over Britain ismaking everyone wait.to chat with us about the story.finished by tomorrow! Hmm, I've read ff.net fics by the hundreds - and I've found A/Ns that not only are much more lengthy than yours but in some cases are longer than the fic itself. As of a few days ago they were still on, too. So.. I really don't think that, given the overall length of Sunset, your A/N really don't seem THAT long. Personally, I don't think there's any reason for "them" to boot you off. On a side note, I had always hoped that JKR would introduce a HP/HG ship but.. I felt kind of disappointed at the end of vol06. :| So, I guess I'll have to keep reading your ideas of a H&H matchup ^^ Ralph |
Re: Fanfiction.net issues.
--- In snorkack@..., "demetrius_toskevy"
<demetrius_toskevy@y...> wrote: Chapter 11 for "Sunset over Britian" doesn't show up on the list ofFanfic.net has a latency problem with their data base, probably due to its size. On my system the file was uploaded and accessible from the url above for nearly four hours before the chapter finally appeared in their listing. There isn't anything Alyx and I can do about this. All we can do is post the new chapter here right after we post it to fanfic.net. :) - Bob |
Chapter 11
trecklar
When does Voldemort & Snape get to make the disclaimers?
S P O I L E R S P A C E What a wonderful chapter. Will Dumbles ever get his comeupince? The thought of them making Harry & Hermione go through all this is starting to grate on my nerves. I grew up in a Dursley type household and I have never liked Dumbledore. I just hope the ending is worth it. |
Re: Fanfiction
--- In snorkack@..., "bobmi357" <submitaccount@y...> wrote:
--- In snorkack@..., "tendrarinstat" <tendrarinstat@y...>I've chapter.read are 1K chapters, with a horcrux destroyed in every other me. :)If they decided to write one, it would be much better.I won't say we will never do a HBP spinoff, I just don't see it as
The only really good post HBP fan fic that I've read so far is by Creative Quill on ff.net. It's called "Evanescence." And no, the title has nothing to do with the band. :D You can find the story at: |
Sunset over Britain
Hi everyone, my name is Ana, I'm 35 and I love all HP Universe. Some
days ago some friend of mine gave the link of your story and I loved It!!. So in the last chapter you downloud in fanfiction you give the link to your group and here I am ready to enjoy it :D. Please forgive any spell mistakes I could make because English is not my first language I was born in Venezuela but I am actualy living in Portugal, so please I beg your mercy. I hope to ear and read from you soon. Bye Ana |
Re: Fanfiction
--- In snorkack@..., "tendrarinstat" <tendrarinstat@y...>
wrote: I really hope Bob and Alyx write a sequel to HBP. All the ones I'veI won't say we will never do a HBP spinoff, I just don't see it as likely. JKR has limited what an author has to work with at the end of HBP. Unlike the other books. To be honest if I were to do a HBP fic I'd throw the whole horcrux idea out the window. But thats just me. :) - Bob |
Re: Fanfiction
michapuss
This is a good one:
She's written about 10 chapters so far and it seems interesting to date. --- In snorkack@..., "tendrarinstat" <tendrarinstat@y...> wrote: I really hope Bob and Alyx write a sequel to HBP. All the ones I'vechapter. If they decided to write one, it would be much better. |
Re: Fanfiction
Creative Quill has started one, Evanescence, that looks to be shaping
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up to be as enjoyable as her other work. While her chapters are not as long as Bob and Alyxs' she does try to update every day or so Fin On 8/9/05, tendrarinstat <tendrarinstat@...> wrote:
I really hope Bob and Alyx write a sequel to HBP. All the ones I've |
Re: A quick question(s) about chapter 10
Narcissa's recovering nicely. She's off the potions and is
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getting stronger each day. However, Lucius was a member of the Board of Governors. As an escaped convict, he obviously cannot fulfill that role, so the Board tapped Narcissa to take his place. We probably should have made that part clearer, but we were in a hurry to finish the Hearing that ya'll wanted to read so much :D Once SoB and it's sequel are complete, we probably won't be writing any more HP fanfic…at least, not for awhile. Of course, if the plot bunny from hell attacks us, things may change. Chapter 11 is almost written. I can't tell you when it will be posted, because I'm not sure how long it will take me to edit. I usually edit half the story one day, then the rest of the story the next. If the story is finished tonight and I start editing it tomorrow, it should be out by Wednesday (but don't hold me to that, folks!). Thanks for reading! ~Alyx~ --- In snorkack@..., "christina" <nina_79934@y...> wrote:
You have Narcissa in this chapter at the trial. I thought she was still |
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