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Chapty 11

 

Ok, do you guys prefer reviews here, or on ff.net? also, do you prefer
new threads, or reply's to other threads? so many options....

I would say great work, but that would be an understatement, and then
there is all the usual "damn man, i can't wait to read more, get your
buts in gear" etc. but whats the point?
your writting is great, and you know it!
and you only made me late for work twice! but then again, i could
blame my alarm clock...
i know how hermy feels about spiders, since ive lived in this house,
i've had them crawl on my while trying (i dont sleep easily) to sleep,
and thinking it was lent, i grabbed it, crushed it, and threw it, and
counting the number of marks on my wall *counts* only 10? well, i gues
i did only trap a few, and i can't really see the marks on my floor...
well, i get alot of "visitors" in my room, i see a spider, i kill it
(they make a nice crackling sound when they burn*evil grin*)
I do feel sorry for harry's leg....if only he could cut it open, and
then get more phoenix tears....
or you know, cut it off, and re-grow it, but then i spose that
petty-gross would have done that too hus finger....
R.A.B.
Regulas Assinine(wtf is his middle name?) Black
or so i think....
if thats even what you were talking about....
poor DUMbubbler, went and got killed for nuthing...

Final Fantasy 7: Advent Children, CANT WAIT BABY YEAH!!!
I'm even replaying the game (currently trying to finish getting
Cloud's and Aeris' final limits, Disk One, Before Temple of the
Ancients, both have Level 3-2)
I think I missed one of the turtle paradise's flyers, damnit

Enough babble, LET THE GAMES BEGIN!!!.... or end, i think its "bed time"
Nite!


Chapter 11 Review

Vern
 

Hi, thought I'd review here instead of on FF so I can see your
response. I still haven't figured out how to over there, but then I'm
a slow old handyelf and these here newfangled electronical gizmos tend
to make me a little batty. (I heard that smirk) Ah hem, now on with
the review. That was bloody brilliant. Such a moving and inspired bit
of literature I have seldom scene in the annals of fanficdom. Are you
suitibly impressed? have I gotten your attention? Goody, really I just
wanted to say that the way you put that chapter together was quite
well done. I am greatly enjoying Harry and his attempts to be patient
with Dumbdore and Snarvellus, and the way they just keep trying, and
he just keeps pushing them out of his way. The Ball was a hoot. Ron,
Dean, and Seamus just don't get it, maybe one day... Loved the scene
in the rose garden as Draco finally gets a clue. Gotta love Luna and
her sweet dottiness. Then again, she is such a lady in the way she
deals with attackers. I guess ya gotta wonder who trained those two
trolls to look like students. They couldn't possibly be human and be
that clueless could they? Ah well, at least the two lovers got back to
the dance. Looking forward to Xmas at Grimmauld Place and to the
revelation of Harry's big plan, that should be very interesting.
Thanks loads for sharing such fine work with your adoring fans.

Vern


Re: Just Wondering

 

--- In snorkack@..., "Kirk L. Staley" <kauthor@g...> wrote:
I was just wondering if you plan to put out your previous two story in
one large file each? Put together all the chapters?
At the moment my own personal plans are to continue writing Sunset. I
probably could do as you ask, but since Yahoo only gives us a paltry
20mb for storage here, it would be a shame to waste the space doubling
up files.

Part of the problem is that Sunset may very well take up a lot more
chapters than DA or SC. Both of which were in the mid teens. Here I am
working on chapter 12 and I haven't even had christmas yet.

- Bob


Re: Boot/What Happened

ralph s.
 

--- In snorkack@..., "Alyx" <alyxnw@y...> wrote:
Just a quick note for those who may not have read the A/N on
the
subject. It seems that a reviewer is under the impression that our
story will be booted from Fanfic.net due to the length of our
Author's
Notes and because they are too "chatty". We don't really think
that
will happen but, on the off chance that Sunset over Britain is
removed, we can pick up right away, here on the group, without
making
everyone wait.

The group is also a good place to contact us with question or
to
chat with us about the story.

Oh, and if you have any favorite authors or stories, recommend
them to the group, would ya? Pooling our knowledge, we can direct
people to some great stories that may not have been read otherwise!

Thanks everyone,
~Alyx~

P.S. I'm editing chapter 10 now. I'm hoping to have it
finished
by tomorrow!

Hmm,

I've read ff.net fics by the hundreds - and I've found A/Ns that not
only are much more lengthy than yours but in some cases are longer
than the fic itself. As of a few days ago they were still on, too.
So.. I really don't think that, given the overall length of Sunset,
your A/N really don't seem THAT long. Personally, I don't think
there's any reason for "them" to boot you off.

On a side note, I had always hoped that JKR would introduce a HP/HG
ship but.. I felt kind of disappointed at the end of vol06. :| So, I
guess I'll have to keep reading your ideas of a H&H matchup ^^

Ralph


Chapter 10

Dee
 

Another great chapter. Usually Evil!Dumbedore bores me. This is a fun story though.

It's nice to see Harry finally throwing down on the old man.

Dee

ps Your disclaimers are funny too. Poor Ron. Not. :)


Re: Fanfiction.net issues.

 

--- In snorkack@..., "demetrius_toskevy"
<demetrius_toskevy@y...> wrote:
Chapter 11 for "Sunset over Britian" doesn't show up on the list of
chapters on fanfiction.net. However it can be accessed if you use the
url for chapter 11.
The URL is
Fanfic.net has a latency problem with their data base, probably due to
its size. On my system the file was uploaded and accessible from the
url above for nearly four hours before the chapter finally appeared in
their listing.

There isn't anything Alyx and I can do about this. All we can do is
post the new chapter here right after we post it to fanfic.net. :)

- Bob


Fanfiction.net issues.

demetrius_toskevy
 

Chapter 11 for "Sunset over Britian" doesn't show up on the list of
chapters on fanfiction.net. However it can be accessed if you use the
url for chapter 11.
The URL is


Just Wondering

 

I was just wondering if you plan to put out your previous two story in
one large file each? Put together all the chapters?


AU

 

This story is slightly AU. It is not Completely AU because this
actually is possible, the way you write the story.


Chapter 11

trecklar
 

When does Voldemort & Snape get to make the disclaimers?


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What a wonderful chapter. Will Dumbles ever get his comeupince? The
thought of them making Harry & Hermione go through all this is
starting to grate on my nerves. I grew up in a Dursley type
household and I have never liked Dumbledore. I just hope the ending
is worth it.


Re: Fanfiction

 

--- In snorkack@..., "bobmi357" <submitaccount@y...> wrote:
--- In snorkack@..., "tendrarinstat" <tendrarinstat@y...>
wrote:
I really hope Bob and Alyx write a sequel to HBP. All the ones
I've
read are 1K chapters, with a horcrux destroyed in every other
chapter.
If they decided to write one, it would be much better.

BTW can anyone recommend good post HBP fanfiction?
I won't say we will never do a HBP spinoff, I just don't see it as
likely. JKR has limited what an author has to work with at the end of
HBP. Unlike the other books. To be honest if I were to do a HBP fic
I'd throw the whole horcrux idea out the window. But thats just
me. :)

- Bob

The only really good post HBP fan fic that I've read so far is by
Creative Quill on ff.net. It's called "Evanescence." And no, the title
has nothing to do with the band. :D

You can find the story at:


Sunset over Britain

 

Hi everyone, my name is Ana, I'm 35 and I love all HP Universe. Some
days ago some friend of mine gave the link of your story and I loved
It!!. So in the last chapter you downloud in fanfiction you give the
link to your group and here I am ready to enjoy it :D. Please forgive
any spell mistakes I could make because English is not my first
language I was born in Venezuela but I am actualy living in Portugal,
so please I beg your mercy. I hope to ear and read from you soon.

Bye

Ana


Re: Chapter 10

 

Ok, I went ahead and merged and cleaned up the fic list, enjoy!


Re: Chapter 10

 

--- In snorkack@..., Andrew Boyce <darthdrew1704@y...> wrote:
what story are you talking about and can i get a link please?
I'm talking about Sunset over Brittain (sp?) and its in the files section


Wizarding World Network

 

I Found this awesome message board through a friend check it out at


Re: Fanfiction

 

--- In snorkack@..., "tendrarinstat" <tendrarinstat@y...>
wrote:
I really hope Bob and Alyx write a sequel to HBP. All the ones I've
read are 1K chapters, with a horcrux destroyed in every other chapter.
If they decided to write one, it would be much better.

BTW can anyone recommend good post HBP fanfiction?
I won't say we will never do a HBP spinoff, I just don't see it as
likely. JKR has limited what an author has to work with at the end of
HBP. Unlike the other books. To be honest if I were to do a HBP fic
I'd throw the whole horcrux idea out the window. But thats just me. :)

- Bob


Re: Fanfiction

michapuss
 

This is a good one:



She's written about 10 chapters so far and it seems interesting to
date.


--- In snorkack@..., "tendrarinstat" <tendrarinstat@y...>
wrote:
I really hope Bob and Alyx write a sequel to HBP. All the ones I've
read are 1K chapters, with a horcrux destroyed in every other
chapter.
If they decided to write one, it would be much better.

BTW can anyone recommend good post HBP fanfiction?


Re: Fanfiction

 

Creative Quill has started one, Evanescence, that looks to be shaping
up to be as enjoyable as her other work.



While her chapters are not as long as Bob and Alyxs' she does try to
update every day or so

Fin

On 8/9/05, tendrarinstat <tendrarinstat@...> wrote:
I really hope Bob and Alyx write a sequel to HBP. All the ones I've
read are 1K chapters, with a horcrux destroyed in every other chapter.
If they decided to write one, it would be much better.

BTW can anyone recommend good post HBP fanfiction?



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Fanfiction

 

I really hope Bob and Alyx write a sequel to HBP. All the ones I've
read are 1K chapters, with a horcrux destroyed in every other chapter.
If they decided to write one, it would be much better.

BTW can anyone recommend good post HBP fanfiction?


Re: A quick question(s) about chapter 10

 

Narcissa's recovering nicely. She's off the potions and is
getting stronger each day. However, Lucius was a member of the Board
of Governors. As an escaped convict, he obviously cannot fulfill that
role, so the Board tapped Narcissa to take his place. We probably
should have made that part clearer, but we were in a hurry to finish
the Hearing that ya'll wanted to read so much :D

Once SoB and it's sequel are complete, we probably won't be
writing any more HP fanfic…at least, not for awhile. Of course, if the
plot bunny from hell attacks us, things may change.

Chapter 11 is almost written. I can't tell you when it will be
posted, because I'm not sure how long it will take me to edit. I
usually edit half the story one day, then the rest of the story the
next. If the story is finished tonight and I start editing it
tomorrow, it should be out by Wednesday (but don't hold me to that,
folks!).

Thanks for reading!

~Alyx~

--- In snorkack@..., "christina" <nina_79934@y...> wrote:
You have Narcissa in this chapter at the trial. I thought she was still
recovering and in hiding? I mean wouldn't word get out that she was
seen in Hogsmeade?

I really am enjoying this story, and I am glad i found this story
early. The other two took me three days to read, but it was so worth it.

I also know that you have stated that you will be done writting HP fics
after the sequel. Yet I was wondering if maybe there was hope of a Luna
and Harry story in the future?

Okay one last question...then I'm done I promise. Will Chapter 11 be
out Wednesday or early Thrusday? I thought I read a message saying that
you would post most likely every 3.5 days, and wanted to keep
everything in my head.

Whew done, thank you, and have a great night/day.

Christina