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Just Wondering

 

I was just wondering if you plan to put out your previous two story in
one large file each? Put together all the chapters?


AU

 

This story is slightly AU. It is not Completely AU because this
actually is possible, the way you write the story.


Chapter 11

trecklar
 

When does Voldemort & Snape get to make the disclaimers?


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What a wonderful chapter. Will Dumbles ever get his comeupince? The
thought of them making Harry & Hermione go through all this is
starting to grate on my nerves. I grew up in a Dursley type
household and I have never liked Dumbledore. I just hope the ending
is worth it.


Re: Fanfiction

 

--- In snorkack@..., "bobmi357" <submitaccount@y...> wrote:
--- In snorkack@..., "tendrarinstat" <tendrarinstat@y...>
wrote:
I really hope Bob and Alyx write a sequel to HBP. All the ones
I've
read are 1K chapters, with a horcrux destroyed in every other
chapter.
If they decided to write one, it would be much better.

BTW can anyone recommend good post HBP fanfiction?
I won't say we will never do a HBP spinoff, I just don't see it as
likely. JKR has limited what an author has to work with at the end of
HBP. Unlike the other books. To be honest if I were to do a HBP fic
I'd throw the whole horcrux idea out the window. But thats just
me. :)

- Bob

The only really good post HBP fan fic that I've read so far is by
Creative Quill on ff.net. It's called "Evanescence." And no, the title
has nothing to do with the band. :D

You can find the story at:


Sunset over Britain

 

Hi everyone, my name is Ana, I'm 35 and I love all HP Universe. Some
days ago some friend of mine gave the link of your story and I loved
It!!. So in the last chapter you downloud in fanfiction you give the
link to your group and here I am ready to enjoy it :D. Please forgive
any spell mistakes I could make because English is not my first
language I was born in Venezuela but I am actualy living in Portugal,
so please I beg your mercy. I hope to ear and read from you soon.

Bye

Ana


Re: Chapter 10

 

Ok, I went ahead and merged and cleaned up the fic list, enjoy!


Re: Chapter 10

 

--- In snorkack@..., Andrew Boyce <darthdrew1704@y...> wrote:
what story are you talking about and can i get a link please?
I'm talking about Sunset over Brittain (sp?) and its in the files section


Wizarding World Network

 

I Found this awesome message board through a friend check it out at


Re: Fanfiction

 

--- In snorkack@..., "tendrarinstat" <tendrarinstat@y...>
wrote:
I really hope Bob and Alyx write a sequel to HBP. All the ones I've
read are 1K chapters, with a horcrux destroyed in every other chapter.
If they decided to write one, it would be much better.

BTW can anyone recommend good post HBP fanfiction?
I won't say we will never do a HBP spinoff, I just don't see it as
likely. JKR has limited what an author has to work with at the end of
HBP. Unlike the other books. To be honest if I were to do a HBP fic
I'd throw the whole horcrux idea out the window. But thats just me. :)

- Bob


Re: Fanfiction

michapuss
 

This is a good one:



She's written about 10 chapters so far and it seems interesting to
date.


--- In snorkack@..., "tendrarinstat" <tendrarinstat@y...>
wrote:
I really hope Bob and Alyx write a sequel to HBP. All the ones I've
read are 1K chapters, with a horcrux destroyed in every other
chapter.
If they decided to write one, it would be much better.

BTW can anyone recommend good post HBP fanfiction?


Re: Fanfiction

 

Creative Quill has started one, Evanescence, that looks to be shaping
up to be as enjoyable as her other work.



While her chapters are not as long as Bob and Alyxs' she does try to
update every day or so

Fin

On 8/9/05, tendrarinstat <tendrarinstat@...> wrote:
I really hope Bob and Alyx write a sequel to HBP. All the ones I've
read are 1K chapters, with a horcrux destroyed in every other chapter.
If they decided to write one, it would be much better.

BTW can anyone recommend good post HBP fanfiction?



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Fanfiction

 

I really hope Bob and Alyx write a sequel to HBP. All the ones I've
read are 1K chapters, with a horcrux destroyed in every other chapter.
If they decided to write one, it would be much better.

BTW can anyone recommend good post HBP fanfiction?


Re: A quick question(s) about chapter 10

 

Narcissa's recovering nicely. She's off the potions and is
getting stronger each day. However, Lucius was a member of the Board
of Governors. As an escaped convict, he obviously cannot fulfill that
role, so the Board tapped Narcissa to take his place. We probably
should have made that part clearer, but we were in a hurry to finish
the Hearing that ya'll wanted to read so much :D

Once SoB and it's sequel are complete, we probably won't be
writing any more HP fanfic…at least, not for awhile. Of course, if the
plot bunny from hell attacks us, things may change.

Chapter 11 is almost written. I can't tell you when it will be
posted, because I'm not sure how long it will take me to edit. I
usually edit half the story one day, then the rest of the story the
next. If the story is finished tonight and I start editing it
tomorrow, it should be out by Wednesday (but don't hold me to that,
folks!).

Thanks for reading!

~Alyx~

--- In snorkack@..., "christina" <nina_79934@y...> wrote:
You have Narcissa in this chapter at the trial. I thought she was still
recovering and in hiding? I mean wouldn't word get out that she was
seen in Hogsmeade?

I really am enjoying this story, and I am glad i found this story
early. The other two took me three days to read, but it was so worth it.

I also know that you have stated that you will be done writting HP fics
after the sequel. Yet I was wondering if maybe there was hope of a Luna
and Harry story in the future?

Okay one last question...then I'm done I promise. Will Chapter 11 be
out Wednesday or early Thrusday? I thought I read a message saying that
you would post most likely every 3.5 days, and wanted to keep
everything in my head.

Whew done, thank you, and have a great night/day.

Christina


A quick question(s) about chapter 10

 

You have Narcissa in this chapter at the trial. I thought she was still
recovering and in hiding? I mean wouldn't word get out that she was
seen in Hogsmeade?

I really am enjoying this story, and I am glad i found this story
early. The other two took me three days to read, but it was so worth it.

I also know that you have stated that you will be done writting HP fics
after the sequel. Yet I was wondering if maybe there was hope of a Luna
and Harry story in the future?

Okay one last question...then I'm done I promise. Will Chapter 11 be
out Wednesday or early Thrusday? I thought I read a message saying that
you would post most likely every 3.5 days, and wanted to keep
everything in my head.

Whew done, thank you, and have a great night/day.

Christina


Re: the whole reviewy thing

 

--- In snorkack@..., "Jeni Tomlinson"
<pigmentsofourimagination@y...> wrote:
I LOVE your writing style. How difficult is it to allow someone else
to mess with your writing? If my hubby tried to write something i
didn't like on my story i'd be snarkier than hell. Actually, it
works well for us 'cuz he loves to read and review then we get to
brainstorm together about what happens next. I Love that. I just
don't want him to write it. He doesn't want to, so that's all good.
I'm a control freak, as you can tell.
And i'm talking about myself again.
Oh well. I love the stories and i expect more. So deal with it.
JENI TOMLINSON aka ARTCHICK aka CHIA THE CAT
It's actually not hard. Alyx and I work up a basic plotline which is a
couple paragraphs, then a detailed plotline which describe how we get
from point A to point B.

If pressed I would have to say I come up with the basic plotline, then
we work together to build the steps needed. Each chapter is broken
down into a series of step statements. Like below.

X Hermione meeting with Dumbledore.
X Tells her to spy on Harry or he will revoke her prefecture.
X She refuses and hands over her badge.
X Snape attempts Legilimency on her and fails.
X Snape attempts to obliviate her and also fails.
X Hermione chuckles and tells them Harry is a most capable teacher
then leaves.
X Harry and Hermione talk about bravery.
X Narcissa is rescued.
X Draco learns of the rescue and Harry gets his Firebolt back.
X First Study Group Meeting
X Draco Encounters Luna.

These steps are part of what happened in Chapter 6 of Sunset. The X
indicates its completed (meaning that step has been written). Some
steps take only a few paragraphs, others like the first one went on
for several pages.

Now Alyx may write one or more of the scenes in a chapter which I
incorporate into my file. Once its complete she takes over the file
and edits it, correcting any grammar or spelling errors. She also
punches up the dialog or description where needed. And yes, sometimes
I get annoyed by her edits. Especially when she drops out what I
thought was a really good line or two or three. But its a group
effort. I can't bitch too much unless I want to sleep on the couch.
Can I? :)

In all truthfulness, I may do a bulk of the writing, but none of this
would see the light of day without Alyx. Serena was her creation in DA
and SC. She wrote nearly every scene involving her and heavily edited
any scene I wrote involving her. The division of labor between spouses
isn't really a bad idea. It makes this a joint project and its always
fun to work with one's spouse.

Hope this answers your question.
- Bob


the whole reviewy thing

Jeni Tomlinson
 

I reviewed on FF, but i had to mosey on down the road to see what
all the hubub was about at your yahoo group. Pretty snazzzy. Loved
the stories. I am definitely waiting anxiously...for the next
installment. When i started writing mine i assured myself that i'd
always be several chapters ahead so i could post easily and not be
swayed by reviewers.
HA.
Yes, I am a reviewer junkie.They started coming in and i threw all
my previously written chapters out in one premature...well. It
wasn't pretty. All that happened was i didn't get reviews on any of
the chapters but the last one. Serves me right.
Sorry. I'm apparently too self-involved to realize this is YOUR
review.
I LOVE your writing style. How difficult is it to allow someone else
to mess with your writing? If my hubby tried to write something i
didn't like on my story i'd be snarkier than hell. Actually, it
works well for us 'cuz he loves to read and review then we get to
brainstorm together about what happens next. I Love that. I just
don't want him to write it. He doesn't want to, so that's all good.
I'm a control freak, as you can tell.
And i'm talking about myself again.
Oh well. I love the stories and i expect more. So deal with it.
JENI TOMLINSON aka ARTCHICK aka CHIA THE CAT


Re: Hi

 

--- In snorkack@..., "Kirsten" <kirt30@h...> wrote:
Hi, I've just joined this group and I thought I would say hello
Hello right back at you. :)


Hi

Kirsten
 

Hi, I've just joined this group and I thought I would say hello


Re: Chapter 10

CRS
 

Dude, thanks for the links. Here's a quick format for
the first page. If you can't see this, just add a <br>
tag after each link, and they should be okay.

-Crs

<HTML>
<HEAD>
<TITLE>Fanfic Updates</TITLE>
</HEAD>
<BODY TEXT="00fff0" BGCOLOR="000000">

June 02, 2005:
<br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
</BODY>
</HTML>

--- Andrew Boyce <darthdrew1704@...> wrote:

what story are you talking about and can i get a
link please?

David <guess996633@...> wrote:I take it this
is where I get to review Chappy 10? W00t!
First off, damn Harry is slow, I mean, if I had a
half nekkid chick on
my lap in a hot tub, I would think I would do a
little more than
fondling (at least is she was willing, rape is not
okay, if any of the
females I know where raped, and I could find out who
did it, I would
kill them, jail or not, no one, absolutely no one
touches my women
without their consent)
Which reminds me, if anyone in chicago reads this,
find a Drew
Bradford and kick his ass for cheating on his wife,
aka my adopted
little sister who is moving in with her mother right
now, I'm not even
close to that area, so I can't)

Now where was I?
Oh! Wouldn't it be funny if Fawkes suddenly made an
appearance just to
peck at bubblebore?
I am rather glad you switched to Yahoo!Groups, as I
get alot of pop-up
from FF.Net
oh, and recomended fics?
I can't remember all of the great ones except for
Cassandra Claire and
Barb (both on schnoogle) and I can give you a few
links, mainly to my
lists, so here goes! (please note, the fourth link
wont be up for half
an hour of this posting, snice I have to go de-merge
it from another file)
Http://www.blackfiredragon.com/fic.html (i think
these were updates,
so some may lead to other chapters than the first)
(there
sould be 9 or 10 fics
on this list, marcello school, path of war and mind
mage were all
really good, i dont remember what the other ones
were....
this is a
list which is
properly formatted, some fics on this are ones that
im in the middle
of reading (currently purpose, but I dont follow in
any order, just
whatever appeals to me) and some may conflict with:
since i
accidentaly added
some fics to the 3rd without realizing i head read
them before

now the question of the say, why are there sepperate
files instead of
just all in my bookmarks? well its simple, i get a
crapload of pop-ups
on this comp, not to mention its slow, so I head
over to the much
faster computer that blocks pop-ups (i love you
firefox) and then
throw them into notepad where i attempt to format it
(if I have time)
(i used to design sites in notepad, but that was
years ago) and then I
can load them onto this compy with minimal pop-ups!
ok, i think ill go switch compys and upload fic4
that is if the other
compy isn't taken
have fun, ill be waiting for #11!!





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Re: Thanks for all the fish, er I mean updates

Andrew Boyce
 

What story are you talking about and can i get a link to Bob and Alyx yahoo group please?

Vern wrote:
Hey Bob and Alyx. I was pleasantly surprised, delighted even, to see
you started your own group. As you know, I hope, I've been enjoying
your stories for several weeks now, and chapter 10 is definitely
another great one. As I think I've said before, what I most enjoy
about this story is how you've exptapolated certain characteristics of
the various characters and made them you own and still remained true
to canon in their personalities more or less. I loved the overwrought
Molly in this chapter and how she's so clueless and trying to blame
everyone else for her problems, which she obviously started herself.
In fact I thought the whole hearing was quite well done. Amelia Bones
being part of the board gives a whole new meaning to the phrase
conflict of interest, and I absolutely love it. Even though it puts
her in a delicate spot legally I would think, it still goves her some
power to influence the whole scenario. That is very well done, in my
not-so-humble opinion. (Why be humble about your opinions, right?
They're yours, be proud of them even it they're out to lunch) So
anyway, I could spend several hours analyzing the whole chapter, which
would be totally pointless I think, so I will just say another hearty
WELL DONE!! I'm greatly enjoying the story, I'll be glad to add to the
mayhem here like I do on Abraxan's group if you'd like, and thanks for
sharing your wonderful stories with us. Oh, and the name of the group
is perfect, lol.

Vern, off to read some other lesser story while waiting with bated
breath for the next update of Sunset.


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