Hey, first loved the new chapter and i quess everything up til now has been the calm before the storm but as your notes says it will get more evil, dark and sexual before it is over with but then just think there is always a calm after the storm before another front moves in to take it's place.? You ever notice it will down pour when you walk out the door but when you walk in it stops.? Oh well..Loved the new chapter and love the story such a wonderful creative idea and you two definately have compatible writing styles.? I love the pet peeves as well.
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Now my question, I may have missed and I will go back and reread the story but I thought the Grangers' were in hinding so why are they working?? I thought they were staying at Grimmald Place.? Have they been working this entire time and just returning at the end of the day?? I'm sorry this is just something that either I missed in reading or seems like an inconsisty...please don't take that the wrong way.? It just really caught me by suprise.? I guess that is what made it such a wonderful and powerful scene.?
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Nite,
Kelly
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Don't let the bed bugs bite!? If they do get a new bed or better yet find someone else's bed. :-)
