Hm.
Great Group. Love 'Sunset' so far.
I like the attitude, the humor. Seems that Harry is Super!Harry, but I
like the small flaws he has. Even Kal-El had his character flaws, so
does Harry.
Loved the Ghostbusters quotes. Now patiently waiting for "Ray, when
someone asks if you're a God, you say "Yes"!
or
When someone asks Harry for the upteenth time how bad it's gonna get
during the war and he snaps: "Human sacrifice, dogs and cats living
together - mass hysteria!"
Sorry. My PlotBunny Hat (TM) got stuck on my head. I've been beta
reading for a few hours so I came to your group to look around and
read the latest chapter of 'Sunset.' Good work. Love your
foreshadowing, how you switch back and forth from the
Pay-Attention-This-Detail-Is-Important phrasing -- then switching to
the Subtle-Understated-JKRlike-Sneaky-Foreshadowing.
And the spider thing? I'm hoping for a resolution to that. And I hope
you have a good name for Potter's little 'retreat' thingy.
Thanks again for such a great set of stories.
*Opens butterbeer, toasts authors*
"Here's to It,
And to It again.
When you get to It,
and can't do It;
Come see me,
because I'm used to It!"
Later
Sonicdale
aka
Dale Olson
dolson@...
"Still looking for Klingon relatives, my lightsaber and a decent
Quidditch broom."
