Hey Bob and Alyx. I was pleasantly surprised, delighted even, to see
you started your own group. As you know, I hope, I've been enjoying
your stories for several weeks now, and chapter 10 is definitely
another great one. As I think I've said before, what I most enjoy
about this story is how you've exptapolated certain characteristics of
the various characters and made them you own and still remained true
to canon in their personalities more or less. I loved the overwrought
Molly in this chapter and how she's so clueless and trying to blame
everyone else for her problems, which she obviously started herself.
In fact I thought the whole hearing was quite well done. Amelia Bones
being part of the board gives a whole new meaning to the phrase
conflict of interest, and I absolutely love it. Even though it puts
her in a delicate spot legally I would think, it still goves her some
power to influence the whole scenario. That is very well done, in my
not-so-humble opinion. (Why be humble about your opinions, right?
They're yours, be proud of them even it they're out to lunch) So
anyway, I could spend several hours analyzing the whole chapter, which
would be totally pointless I think, so I will just say another hearty
WELL DONE!! I'm greatly enjoying the story, I'll be glad to add to the
mayhem here like I do on Abraxan's group if you'd like, and thanks for
sharing your wonderful stories with us. Oh, and the name of the group
is perfect, lol.
Vern, off to read some other lesser story while waiting with bated
breath for the next update of Sunset.
