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Just a quick note: Chapter 15 has been edited and is going through the
final read-through now. It should be up soon. Oh, and we were only
slightly less evil with this chapter than we were with the last. :D

We hope everyone enjoys it.

~Alyx~

Just a quick note: Chapter 15 has been edited and is going through the
final read-through now.? It should be up soon.? Oh, and we were only
slightly less evil with this chapter than we were with the last. :D

We hope everyone enjoys it.?

~Alyx~

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Lots
Of
Spoilers
For
Chapter
Fifteen
Which
Is
Pretty
Damm
Cool.

A very nice chapter indeed.

This is one of those solid chapters that show the quality of writing
that Bob and Alyx produce. We have some action, some drama, plot
exposition, new and funky tricks (I'd love to know what it was that
Harry did to the DE and how it works) and solid relationship progresion.

To top it all off, we now have Percy the walking betrayer, why do I
see hm as the sort who will be used to kill someone important like
amelia Bones? After all, as a junior toady, he can get in to see her
with no problem:)

I like how Harry handled Nott. It was restrained, something he has had
to learn. After all, he could accidently vaporise them or worse. Was
it a spell he used? Or sheer force of will exerted over magic?

Once again, you've shown how insightful Luna is. I do like where you
have taken the character.

Cheers

Finbar

Bravo on a wonderful chapter, and the beautiful progress of Harry and
Hermione's relationship. Arthur under an imperious? Now that is what I
call suspense.

Thank you for providing me with so much wonderful literature.

Balint D. Szoke

--- In snorkack@..., Steven Thomas <dragon03716@y...> wrote:

Great News on that Alyx

I for one am very pleased with all the effort you and Bob place in

to you're writing.

***Clap Clap Clap***

I for one just wanted to thank you two for the wonderful writing.

Steven

Alyx <alyxnw@y...> wrote:
Just a quick note: Chapter 15 has been edited and is going through the
final read-through now. It should be up soon. Oh, and we were only
slightly less evil with this chapter than we were with the last. :D

We hope everyone enjoys it.

~Alyx~




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Great chapter! Well, gory, and dark-ish. Will we find
out more about the killed DE's?

I think that the issue of the snapped wands needs to
be adressed. I don't think it is legal (duh!), and DD
would try to do something about it. Oh course, he
knows that Harry did it, but there is no proof...

"I will let you kill Voldemort..." Okay, DD gets the
creeps. I think that this is the majpr step on the pat
leading to the destruction pf Britain.

And I think that "Weasley" at the end was Percy. Care
to vote, peeps?

When Britain is conquered by V, what will the
international reactions be? Will they try to get
involved? What about the area Harry goes too? What
will the peple there think of him, if they know he's
there, that is.

Well, that's it from me now... this chapter could use
some more work, but it's above the regular ff
standard, so...

-Crs

--- magyareagle <magyareagle@...> wrote:

Bravo on a wonderful chapter, and the beautiful
progress of Harry and
Hermione's relationship. Arthur under an imperious?
Now that is what I
call suspense.

Thank you for providing me with so much wonderful
literature.

Balint D. Szoke

--- In snorkack@..., Steven Thomas
<dragon03716@y...> wrote:

Great News on that Alyx

I for one am very pleased with all the effort you

and Bob place in
to you're writing.

***Clap Clap Clap***

I for one just wanted to thank you two for the

wonderful writing.

Steven

Alyx <alyxnw@y...> wrote:
Just a quick note: Chapter 15 has been edited and

is going through the

final read-through now. It should be up soon.

Oh, and we were only

slightly less evil with this chapter than we were

with the last. :D

We hope everyone enjoys it.

~Alyx~




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