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Ch 14 Review


Vern
 

There be spoilers ahead for those who haven't yet read the chapter so
you might want to skip this message for the time being just in case...



So Bob, ya pulled another one out of your....Oh, sorry...that was an
review for another author. Hmmm, Oh yes, now I remember...

Very good chapter. Lots of things happened and it ended with a great
cliffie which leaves our tongues lollin' for ch 15. Good job on
building the sexual tension between the two primaries, and well done
building the tension of the whole story for that matter.

Looking forward to more, as always.

Vern