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"Sunset over Britian" Chpt9 Feedback


yorath_thewolf
 

well as I'm not fond enough of ff.net to join, figured I'd join yall's
group so I could leave feedback and well to see if yall posted here
first ;^).

well you promiced that things would get a lot darker before they got
better and you haven't lied. it's interesting to see Moldyshorts
intelligent, or at least the lacky's & minions haveing something
resembleing a clue. and ooooh, bad form on Harry. it's been a day since
I read(yes I know I'm slow joining up, blame my sloth :^P) but Harry
really shoulda kept that list of demands of Albus's and handed it over
to the MLE for the growing evidence pile. though the way things are
heating up, it no look like Harry & the Outcasts are gonna be around
long enough for those charges to be filed and Albus to be delt with
thru the Ministry. anyway, gotta say that I'm rather enjoying this
sofar and I'm eagerly awaiting more.


 

You know, its funny when I see reviews like this. And mind you, I'm
not making fun of your review, Alyx and I truly appreciate hearing
from you. The thing we have continually asked people to do is
understand, there is a method to our madness. Should Harry have kept
that list? Maybe, or maybe not.

It's very hard for us to respond to reviews like this without
revealing twists and turns before we are ready to reveal them in
chapters to come. As much as I'd like to, I'll stick to the old adage
of telling you to keep reading. :)

The fic isn't nearly dark enough yet. It's going to get pitch black.
But there are glimpses of light to be seen here and there. We didn't
call this Sunset over Britain because we like pretty sunsets.

Bob

ps. Thanks for your review, and welcome to our little madness :)

--- In snorkack@..., "yorath_thewolf"
<Yorath_theWolf@h...> wrote:
well as I'm not fond enough of ff.net to join, figured I'd join yall's
group so I could leave feedback and well to see if yall posted here
first ;^).

well you promiced that things would get a lot darker before they got
better and you haven't lied. it's interesting to see Moldyshorts
intelligent, or at least the lacky's & minions haveing something
resembleing a clue. and ooooh, bad form on Harry. it's been a day since
I read(yes I know I'm slow joining up, blame my sloth :^P) but Harry
really shoulda kept that list of demands of Albus's and handed it over
to the MLE for the growing evidence pile. though the way things are
heating up, it no look like Harry & the Outcasts are gonna be around
long enough for those charges to be filed and Albus to be delt with
thru the Ministry. anyway, gotta say that I'm rather enjoying this
sofar and I'm eagerly awaiting more.


yorath_thewolf
 

--- In snorkack@..., "bobmi357" <submitaccount@y...>
wrote:
You know, its funny when I see reviews like this. And mind you, I'm
not making fun of your review, Alyx and I truly appreciate hearing
from you. The thing we have continually asked people to do is
understand, there is a method to our madness. Should Harry have kept
that list? Maybe, or maybe not.
without knowing hte grand plan, and as things will be interesting
without such info(*sigh* the one downside to being a beta/idea man
for a couple of one's favorite ff writers)it does look like a
sizeable snaffu... though getting to rub the Old Fool's face in it
would make up for any lose in that situation most likely.

It's very hard for us to respond to reviews like this without
revealing twists and turns before we are ready to reveal them in
chapters to come. As much as I'd like to, I'll stick to the old
adage
of telling you to keep reading. :)
ooooh I deffently plan to, I'm very much so enjoying this fic.

The fic isn't nearly dark enough yet. It's going to get pitch black.
But there are glimpses of light to be seen here and there. We didn't
call this Sunset over Britain because we like pretty sunsets.
well I deffently look forward to how bad it's gonna get. deffently
liken this one.

Bob

ps. Thanks for your review, and welcome to our little madness :)
thanks, I should fit in just fine here ;^).