Hi,
??? A networking group I'm in, neXco, offered a free video shoot, so I
took them up on it. I had to write a script and then they shot it while I
used the teleprompter. I had never done that before.
??? Here's the link. It's only about a minute long.
??? Please give me an honest opinion. Does it look/sound like me? Does
it feel authentic? Really? Honestly? Is it something you would recommend
that I use in my marketing?
I ask you because I think you will give me an honest opinion.
Thanks.
Linda
--
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CMC*
Howard Consulting,
LLC
LHoward@...
Phone: 703-307-4497
(Eastern timezone)
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You enthusiasm is great. I like that.
One thing I would suggest, though, is varying your focus. That
teleprompter had you staring at the exact same spot the whole time. It is
more natural to glance away from time to time.?
I'm also not sure that it is best for them to keep zooming in, slowly
dropping you lower in the view to where the bottom of the screen is at
your armpits, and then shifting back out to show you from the waist
up.?
Might have been better to cut away to show other relevant shots and come
back to your spiel.
But overall, yes, you can use it. It sounds like you and that you are
genuine.?
Dorothy
At 04:14 PM 11/3/2022, Linda Howard wrote:
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Hi,
? ? ?? A networking group I'm in, neXco, offered a free video shoot,
so I took them up on it. I had to write a script and then they shot it
while I used the teleprompter. I had never done that before.
? ? ?? Here's the link. It's only about a minute long.
? ? ?? Please give me an honest opinion. Does it look/sound like me?
Does it feel authentic? Really? Honestly? Is it something you would
recommend that I use in my marketing?
I ask you because I think you will give me an honest opinion.
Thanks.
Linda
--
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Howard Consulting, LLC
LHoward@...
Phone: 703-307-4497
(Eastern timezone)
?
Click here to
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? ?? CMC?? (Certified Management? Consultant)
? ?? PMP? ? ?? (Project Management Professional)
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~~~~~~~~~
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lhoward@...
office: 703-307-6048
mobile: 703-307-4497
Dorothy Firsching
Dorothy Firsching, PMP
Ursa Major Consulting, LLC
9536 Stevebrook Road
Fairfax, VA? 22032
phone (703) 425-6236
fax (703) 345-9354
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I agree with Dorothy that the video is usable but it is a little stiff in part because you are reading off a teleprompter.? It does convey who you are.? Video is unnatural?especially if you haven't done a lot of it.? Each time you do this you will feel more comfortable. It's professionally done. Liz Wainger President, Wainger Group liz@...
O: 301-340-6831 C: 301-461-3780
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On Thu, Nov 3, 2022 at 4:14 PM Linda Howard < lhoward@...> wrote:
Hi,
??? A networking group I'm in, neXco, offered a free video shoot, so I
took them up on it. I had to write a script and then they shot it while I
used the teleprompter. I had never done that before.
??? Here's the link. It's only about a minute long.
??? Please give me an honest opinion. Does it look/sound like me? Does
it feel authentic? Really? Honestly? Is it something you would recommend
that I use in my marketing?
I ask you because I think you will give me an honest opinion.
Thanks.
Linda
--
Linda Howard, CVF, PMP,
CMC*
Howard Consulting,
LLC
LHoward@...
Phone: 703-307-4497
(Eastern timezone)
?
Click here to
* CVF? ? ?
(Certified Virtual Facilitator)
?? CMC? (Certified
Management?Consultant)
?? PMP??? (Project Management Professional)
-- ~~~~~~~~~ Linda Howard lhoward@... office: 703-307-6048 mobile: 703-307-4497
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I agree with Liz & Dorothy.? With practice, you'll be able to
do it without the teleprompter.? I love the enthusiasm and joy for
your work that you very effectively get across.
Laura Lazar Holbrook, CVF, MMP | Principal
Lazar Holbrook and Associates
10321 Wild Goose Way, Dunkirk, MD 20754
mobile: (301) 775-3879
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I agree with
Dorothy that the video is usable but it is a little stiff in
part because you are reading off a teleprompter.? It does
convey who you are.? Video is unnatural?especially if you
haven't done a lot of it.? Each time you do this you will feel
more comfortable. It's professionally done.
Liz
Wainger
President,
Wainger Group
liz@...
O:
301-340-6831 C: 301-461-3780
On Thu, Nov 3, 2022 at 4:14 PM
Linda Howard < lhoward@...>
wrote:
Hi,
??? A networking group I'm in, neXco, offered a free video
shoot, so I took them up on it. I had to write a script and
then they shot it while I used the teleprompter. I had never
done that before.
??? Here's the link. It's only about a minute long.
??? Please give me an honest opinion. Does it look/sound
like me? Does it feel authentic? Really? Honestly? Is it
something you would recommend that I use in my marketing?
I ask you because I think you will give me an honest
opinion.
Thanks.
Linda
--
Linda Howard, CVF, PMP,
CMC*
Howard
Consulting,
LLC
LHoward@...
Phone: 703-307-4497
(Eastern timezone)
?
Click here to
* CVF? ? ? (Certified Virtual
Facilitator)
?? CMC? (Certified
Management?Consultant)
?? PMP??? (Project
Management Professional)
--
~~~~~~~~~
Linda Howard
lhoward@...
office: 703-307-6048
mobile: 703-307-4497
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Hi Linda,
Loved your voice tone, and pitch.? Your final words felt sincere and inviting.? I feel the initial camera shot was way too close making me feel you were invading my space and I didn't know if I wanted you there yet or not.? I feel over all this was good stuff and like the rest of the troops, practice will make perfect:>)
C??
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On Thu, Nov 3, 2022 at 4:14 PM Linda Howard < lhoward@...> wrote:
Hi,
??? A networking group I'm in, neXco, offered a free video shoot, so I
took them up on it. I had to write a script and then they shot it while I
used the teleprompter. I had never done that before.
??? Here's the link. It's only about a minute long.
??? Please give me an honest opinion. Does it look/sound like me? Does
it feel authentic? Really? Honestly? Is it something you would recommend
that I use in my marketing?
I ask you because I think you will give me an honest opinion.
Thanks.
Linda
--
Linda Howard, CVF, PMP,
CMC*
Howard Consulting,
LLC
LHoward@...
Phone: 703-307-4497
(Eastern timezone)
?
Click here to
* CVF? ? ?
(Certified Virtual Facilitator)
?? CMC? (Certified
Management?Consultant)
?? PMP??? (Project Management Professional)
-- ~~~~~~~~~ Linda Howard lhoward@... office: 703-307-6048 mobile: 703-307-4497
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I have very different feedback. As I have encountered other times, Vimeo is very unfriendly to low bandwidth.? I've tried several times at different times of the day to load the video, and I get "unable to load. Tap to reload." I guess it isn't really an issue since your target customers have decent internet.?
Becky Roberts, from my not-so-smart phone?
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I finally got it to load in pieces.? I agree with everything that’s has been said.? Definitely usable, with ideas for how to make it even better next time! ? Becky Roberts, CPF Master, PMP, CMC Catoctin Consulting, LLC (703) 472-3313 Devoted to improving organizational performance ?
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From: [email protected] < [email protected]> On Behalf Of Laura Holbrook Sent: Thursday, November 3, 2022 9:42 PM To: [email protected]Subject: Re: [FacilitatorLadies] Need honest feedback - does this video feel and sound like me? ? I agree with Liz & Dorothy.? With practice, you'll be able to do it without the teleprompter.? I love the enthusiasm and joy for your work that you very effectively get across. Laura Lazar Holbrook, CVF, MMP | Principal Lazar Holbrook and Associates 10321 Wild Goose Way, Dunkirk, MD 20754 mobile: (301) 775-3879
On 11/3/2022 8:51 PM, Liz Wainger wrote: I agree with Dorothy that the video is usable but it is a little stiff in part because you are reading off a teleprompter.? It does convey who you are.? Video is unnatural?especially if you haven't done a lot of it.? Each time you do this you will feel more comfortable. It's professionally done. Liz Wainger President, Wainger Group liz@... O: 301-340-6831 C: 301-461-3780 ? ? On Thu, Nov 3, 2022 at 4:14 PM Linda Howard <lhoward@...> wrote: Hi, ??? A networking group I'm in, neXco, offered a free video shoot, so I took them up on it. I had to write a script and then they shot it while I used the teleprompter. I had never done that before.
??? Here's the link. It's only about a minute long.
??? Please give me an honest opinion. Does it look/sound like me? Does it feel authentic? Really? Honestly? Is it something you would recommend that I use in my marketing?
I ask you because I think you will give me an honest opinion.
Thanks. Linda --
Linda Howard, CVF, PMP, CMC* Howard Consulting, LLC LHoward@... Phone: 703-307-4497 (Eastern timezone)
? Click here to
? * CVF? ? ? (Certified Virtual Facilitator) ?? CMC? (Certified Management?Consultant) ?? PMP??? (Project Management Professional) -- ~~~~~~~~~ Linda Howard lhoward@... office: 703-307-6048 mobile: 703-307-4497
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Thanks everyone! Becky - so sorry
you had a hard time - yes - my target audience has bandwidth - good
point. Thanks to all of you for your feedback.? Here are my own
thoughts: - It doesn't feel as much like me as I want it to.?
Not as real or authentic.
- Feels rushed - maybe it was teh
speed of the teleprompter or maybe I was nervous or maybe they sped it
up for the final video. In any event, it sounds more rushed and louder
than I feel I am normally.
- It doesn't feel conversational - and
while I know I followed their framework for what to say as I developed
my script, I was really trying to make it sound like I wasn't reading it
- but I didn't get there.
- I was doing something weird with my
shoulder and have some strange shrugging movement that I don't like.
- I
agree with all the other points that you all made.
??? I
did like the color of the shirt I wore.? : )
??? While I will
let it stay on the neXco member directory, it is not something I would
use in my own marketing.
??? However, it was an interesting
experience and makes me want to create something similar - but
different. I have a colleague who does video and could help me create
something better. And now, I know what to expect and could practice it a
little differently. Plus, she could add a different background.? So
this has motivated me to actually hire someone to create a video for
me.? So from that perspective, this was worthwhile and I'm very glad I
did not pay for it.
??? I think the company that did this was
good - from my experience since this is the only time I've ever done
anything like this. So part if my reaction is probably just that I don't
like seeing myself on camera, or promoting myself, or both. But I've
done so much on Zoom cameras over the last several years that I wasn't
as petrified as I might have been before - although I wouldn't even have
DONE this a few years ago!
Anyway - thanks for your feedback.
This is all helpful! Linda
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11/4/22 1:57 PM:
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I finally got it to load in pieces.? I agree
with everything that’s has been said.? Definitely usable, with ideas for
how to make it even better next time! ? Becky Roberts, CPF Master, PMP, CMC Catoctin
Consulting, LLC (703) 472-3313 Devoted to improving
organizational performance ? ? I agree with Liz
& Dorothy.? With practice, you'll be able to do it without the
teleprompter.? I love the enthusiasm and joy for your work that you very
effectively get across. Laura Lazar Holbrook, CVF, MMP |
Principal Lazar Holbrook and Associates 10321 Wild Goose Way, Dunkirk,
MD 20754 mobile:
(301) 775-3879
On 11/3/2022 8:51 PM, Liz Wainger wrote: I agree with Dorothy that the video is usable
but it is a little stiff in part because you are reading off a
teleprompter.? It does convey who you are.? Video is
unnatural?especially if you haven't done a lot of it.? Each time you do
this you will feel more comfortable. It's professionally done. Liz Wainger President, Wainger Group liz@... O: 301-340-6831 C: 301-461-3780 ? ? On Thu, Nov 3, 2022 at 4:14 PM Linda Howard
<lhoward@...> wrote: Hi, ??? A networking group I'm
in, neXco, offered a free video shoot, so I took them up on it. I had to
write a script and then they shot it while I used the teleprompter. I
had never done that before.
??? Here's the link. It's only about
a minute long.
???
Please give me an honest opinion. Does it look/sound like me? Does it
feel authentic? Really? Honestly? Is it something you would recommend
that I use in my marketing?
I ask you because I think you will
give me an honest opinion.
Thanks. Linda --
Linda Howard, CVF,
PMP, CMC* Howard
Consulting, LLC LHoward@... Phone: 703-307-4497 (Eastern timezone)
? Click here to
? * CVF? ? ? (Certified Virtual
Facilitator) ?? CMC? (Certified Management?Consultant) ?? PMP??? (Project Management
Professional) -- ~~~~~~~~~ Linda Howard lhoward@... office:
703-307-6048 mobile: 703-307-4497
--
Linda Howard, CVF, PMP,
CMC*
Howard Consulting,
LLC
LHoward@...
Phone: 703-307-4497
(Eastern timezone)
?
Click here to
* CVF? ? ?
(Certified Virtual Facilitator)
?? CMC? (Certified
Management?Consultant)
?? PMP??? (Project Management Professional)
-- ~~~~~~~~~ Linda Howard lhoward@...office: 703-307-6048 mobile: 703-307-4497
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